Tightness, a horrid choking feeling enveloped Elissa’s throat like cold hands as
she stood watching the man she was suppose to be marrying just, walk away from
her.
Donavin
hadn’t spoken a word when he had seen her; he had just looked at her for a
moment, his eyes had easily shown his disgust and remorse, even pity for her as
he had looked her over before he had then turned on his heel and walked away from her and
the scene as if she had been a total stranger and it was some boring party.
Her
sisters eyes seemed to burn into her, while her aunt she could feel looking at
her with pity, like she had suddenly turned into an abandoned puppy that was
missing a leg.
After a few moments an uncontrollable sob escaped from her throat, she almost fell over from how much it racked through her entire body.
Elissa
had never been beautiful or thin like her sister; perfectly blonde, Bianca had
been referred to more than once in front of her.
The
wedding had been planned and arranged by her father just before he had died a
few months ago.
The
union of both families names by marriage, would secure a multi-million dollar business partnership for the families’
nectary franchise in France and a publishing company that supplied newspapers
and magazines to all of the major Sim towns, including a new contract for ten
years to Bridge Port.
Heavy
tears rolled down her chubby cheeks like an unstoppable waterfall, Elissa felt
as though her heart was tearing into tiny pieces and being flung carelessly about
like confetti, tossed into a stiff breeze only to fall in a muddy puddle and be
leeched the bright colours.
Lifting
her head, Elissa wiped away her tears, after a few more uncontrollable sobs she squared her shoulders and marched down the boardwalk following in Donavins’ footsteps, but she wasn't chasing after him though.
She
was done with running after people from that moment on.
Her
head itched from the chemicals of the dye she had used, Bianca thought it
would look ‘sweet’ if her hair matched her grooms in the photos, not to mention
the flowers stems that were poking into her scalp with a million bobby-pins.
The fur trimmed velvet dress
was hot in the summer evening and it was unforgiving with her movements. She worried that any moment she
might split it open with how snug the material felt as it clung to her skin
with her sweat.
“Elissa,
you know what you should do...” Bianca began, but was cut off before she could
finish.
Speaking
through gritted teeth, Elissa stomped down the steps of the boardwalk speaking
with each step to make sure her words were emphasized.
“I, don’t, care, Bianca, really.”
She
got to the wedding car, since Donavin had taken a taxi to where ever he had run off
too, and tossed her shoes onto the passenger seat with such force they bounced to
the floor of the car with a heavy 'thud'.
Getting
into the car, Elissa sat for a moment gripping the steering wheel until her knuckles
were white as she took a few long deep breaths to calm herself down.
Mitchell,
Bianca’s fiancĂ©e spoke softly and kindly to Elissa. “Where are you going?”
She
gritted her teeth thinking for a moment, she then turned the cars key making the
engine roar to life a little too loudly.
“France,
someone’s got to enjoy the honeymoon, so it may as well be me.” Elissa breathed
out forcefully and glanced at Mitchell giving him a small quick, half hearted smile.
“Keep
in touch; we'll see you when you get back.” He gave a small smile with a slight wave;
Elissa glanced in the rear view mirror and saw her aunt give her a similar
smile and wave as she began to drive away.
“If
I come back...” Elissa muttered to herself as she drove down the serine tree
lined, cobble paved street and turned out of town.
She would stay with her cousin Courtney in France and take charge of the families nectary business for herself.
She was going to be the one who called the shots from now on, no one was going to use her as a negotiation piece ever again.
She would stay with her cousin Courtney in France and take charge of the families nectary business for herself.
She was going to be the one who called the shots from now on, no one was going to use her as a negotiation piece ever again.
Great to see you writing again! You have such a wonderfully descriptive writing style that I just love. Love this story so far. I feel bad for Elissa, but I'm glad that she's trying to take charge and not let herself be used for negotiations again. Hope it goes well for her.
ReplyDeleteI loved the beginning to this, opens up a lot of questions as well as descriptively introducing who I am assuming to be the main character. Poor Elissa, but maybe not. It seems as though this whole wedding was not something she had actually wanted, so perhaps she will find herself in France and meet a man who can love her beyond her slightly chubby cheeks. :D
ReplyDeleteSounds very interesting!!!
ReplyDeleteOutstanding :) She isn't wallowing in grief, but taking her honeymoon for herself! I like her already :)
ReplyDeleteThis is great and I really like your writing style! I really like the character of Elissa and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. This is Amandralynn from the sims 3 forums. :)
ReplyDeleteThankyou so much, I'm glad you're enjoying it :D
DeleteI love your writing styles! I wish I had talent in writing! :)
ReplyDeleteLove having you as my friend, just don't forget to be honest with me if you feel something could use tweaking *HUGS*
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